The Lady in Red - Part 1

He noticed her immediately as he entered the Bar. How could he overlook her anyways? The woman in the red minidress lightened up the smoky bar. Markus took his time to appreciate her beauty studying her for more than an hour. The same question going through his mind again and again. Should he risk it?
He emptied the rest of his whiskey in one shot, stood up from his table, summoned his courage and approached.

"uhm.... hey!...." he stammered. ".....nice evening isn't it....?"

The woman slowly turned her head and eyed Markus almost dismissively. Raising an eyebrow she placed her glass on the counter and turned around to face him to make clear that she was willing to give him the chance.

Markus became nervous. Very nervous. He had not thought this through enough. 'What should he say? Should he invite her for a drink? She already had a drink. A compliment maybe? Nonono too ordinary. Oh god she is awaiting a response. Something clever and funny, god damn it!' Sweat ran down his forehead, his hearth was racing. He panicked. 'Fuck it, go with the compliment! Better than nothing!' He looked the already bored looking woman over and said the first thing that came to his mind.


"You have awesome boobs!!" He hesitantly announced.


His thoughts were immediately interrupted as the resounding slap hit his face. He stumbled and had to hold to the pool-table to not fall over. 'Well done, idiot!'

He certainly blew that one. Holding his cheek he walked back to his table, sat down and looked over to the bar where the woman in red seemed like she forgot about him already. He got mad at her. Who did she think she was for slapping him in front of everyone?

He didn't know if it was the alcohol or just his anger, but he wanted to teach that woman a lesson.

At all cost.

He waited till she had to leave for the restroom as he quickly hurried over to the counter and dropped a roofie into her drink.
It didn't take long for her to return, but Markus had already sat back in his place, watching her closely.

When she passed out he quickly hurried over to her and told everyone who wanted to hear it or not: "oh my, looks like my sister had one too many, I'd better bring her home haha...." A drunken guy joined his silly laugh which he was quite thankful for, and even helped him to bring the woman outside to his car.

He thanked him several times and sat down in the drivers seat. That was close.

"This was the first and last time you rejected me bitch.... nobody rejects me more than once...."

He let his victim know and drove off into the night.






(I hope you enjoyed the first part of this ongoing story! For the second part I would like to know from you guys what Markus should do to Larien to pay her back!

Should he:
                    a) Turn her into a Rubber-Sex-Doll and sell her?
or                 b) Force her to hurt innocent people to make her feel guilty and pay her back that way?
or                 c) Suggest your own ending!

Im curious how you would like this story to continue!)




((A HUGE Thank you to
                                    
zuleylarien         and         MarkusReeve    for modeling, suporting and helping me in general to make this story!!! You are awesome! ))